[help] kok error else dalam bash script
#1
misi teman",, ini saya coba kembangin tools live ip cheker yang semalam di post di sini

maksudnya ingin nambahin pilihan untuk melakukan scanning atau tidak ,,
berikut kode nya

Code:
#!/bin/bash
#!/original by predi
#!/editing by junior.riau18

echo '
__    __                                           __                 __
|  |  |  | ________  ________    __      _______   |  |      ________ |  |
|  |__|  ||        ||   _____| _|  |__  |   ____|  |  |____ |    _   ||  | __
|        ||   __   ||  |_____ |_    __| |  |       |   _   ||   |_|  ||  |/  /
|   __   ||  |__|  ||_____   |  |  |    |  |     _ |  | |  ||   _____||     /
|  |  |  ||        | _____|  |  |  |_   |  |____| ||  | |  ||  |_____ |     \
|__|  |__||________||________|  |____|  |_________||__| |__||________||__|\__\
'

#!input net id
echo -n -e "Input your Net ID target(such as 192.168.0.): ";
read ip
echo -n -e "Would you want to save the target and continue with host fingerprinting?(y)/(n): ";
read fp

if ["$fp"=="n"]
for i in {1..10}
do
{
iptest=$ip$i
ping -c 1 $iptest > /dev/null
[ $? -eq 0 ] && echo Host with IP: $iptest is live.
}
done

else
declare -a targetip
a=0;
for i in {1..10}
do
{
iptest=$ip$i
ping -c 2 $iptest > /dev/null
[ $? -eq 0 ] && echo Host with IP: $iptest is live.
targetip["$a"]=$iptest;
let a=$a+1;
}
done
echo "Launch nmap -O"
nmap -O ${targetip[0]};
fi
exit;

setelah dijalankan terdapat error sebagai berikut

Code:
[email protected]:~/cekiplive# ./ceklive.sh

__    __                                           __                 __
|  |  |  | ________  ________    __      _______   |  |      ________ |  |
|  |__|  ||        ||   _____| _|  |__  |   ____|  |  |____ |    _   ||  | __
|        ||   __   ||  |_____ |_    __| |  |       |   _   ||   |_|  ||  |/  /
|   __   ||  |__|  ||_____   |  |  |    |  |     _ |  | |  ||   _____||     /
|  |  |  ||        | _____|  |  |  |_   |  |____| ||  | |  ||  |_____ |     \
|__|  |__||________||________|  |____|  |_________||__| |__||________||__|\__\

Input your Net ID target(such as 192.168.0.): 10.75.42.
Would you want to save the target and continue with host fingerprinting?(y)/(n): n
./ceklive.sh: line 31: syntax error near unexpected token `else'
./ceklive.sh: line 31: `else'
[email protected]:~/cekiplive#

mohon koreksi script nya,, maklum hampir 3 tahun g nyentuh bash lagi

error nya di else,,perasaan g salah ketik,,
makasih

regards junior

#2
ane coba bantu ni om, sorry klu salah ya, baru megang bactrack 2 bulan, n ane baru liat bash script ini yg prtama

jadi kn scriptnya gini

(05-06-2012, 11:19 AM)junior.riau18 Wrote: if ["$fp"=="n"]
for i in {1..10}
do
{
iptest=$ip$i
ping -c 1 $iptest > /dev/null
[ $? -eq 0 ] && echo Host with IP: $iptest is live.
}
done

trus ane rubah jadi gini
Code:
if ["$fp"=="n"];
then
for i in {1..10}
do
{
iptest=$ip$i
ping -c 1 $iptest > /dev/null
[ $? -eq 0 ] && echo Host with IP: $iptest is live.
}
done

jadi, setelah statement if, itu musti ditutup make ";" biar ga tembus, terus di tambahin then

ni ssnya

[Image: 6y1w6x.png]

tapi skrng muncul error gini

./ipchecker.sh: line 21: [y==n]: command not found

ane ga tau lagi gmn, smoga membantu Smile



#3
biar yg dibawah yg bantu yah pusing ane Angry

#4
(06-13-2012, 01:35 AM)Udalah Wrote: ane coba bantu ni om, sorry klu salah ya, baru megang bactrack 2 bulan, n ane baru liat bash script ini yg prtama

jadi kn scriptnya gini

(05-06-2012, 11:19 AM)junior.riau18 Wrote: if ["$fp"=="n"]
for i in {1..10}
do
{
iptest=$ip$i
ping -c 1 $iptest > /dev/null
[ $? -eq 0 ] && echo Host with IP: $iptest is live.
}
done

trus ane rubah jadi gini
Code:
if ["$fp"=="n"];
then
for i in {1..10}
do
{
iptest=$ip$i
ping -c 1 $iptest > /dev/null
[ $? -eq 0 ] && echo Host with IP: $iptest is live.
}
done

jadi, setelah statement if, itu musti ditutup make ";" biar ga tembus, terus di tambahin then

ni ssnya

[Image: 6y1w6x.png]

tapi skrng muncul error gini

./ipchecker.sh: line 21: [y==n]: command not found

ane ga tau lagi gmn, smoga membantu Smile

thanks udah bantu yak
nanti ane revisi lagi tools nya ^_^






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